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PipLove: A story of tortious interference with an inheritance

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There in the closet-darkness, we sit, crouch on shoes, slippers, boots. My back pushes up against the cold, hard metal, round canister of the vacuum cleaner. I pushed Barb and Maria in the closet before me, then slid the door closed. Mom ordered me to do this at times like this. It’s my job to keep Barb and Maria quiet. We wait for our parents to get through their selfish, fuckin’ fight. Donna hides under the soft, turquoise blanket on her bed.

“Get the hell out! Leave me alone!” Mommy screams. I hear a big bang as Daddy curses out the front door.

Mom stores the vacuum cleaner in our bedroom. I like our vacuum cleaner. It is funny-looking, unlike the new, sleek, low, cylinder type advertised by Sears, Roebuck and Company in The Stamford Advocate newspaper, as being noiseless, quietly swooshing over your carpets, so quiet, you won’t even notice it’s there.

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Author: Jean DeVito

Published author.  Partner in a family-established Antique Restoration business. Publications:   “Reflections: Stories from Local Writers/God Is Good.” N.p.: Ferguson Library, 2017. 31-49. Print. “Three Childhood Homes.” The Stamford Advocate 24 Dec. 2016, A ed., News sec.: A011. Print. “The Little Things.” CT Association of Area Agencies on Aging. May 2014.  Older Americans Month 2014 Essay Contest.  State winner.  Connecticut, Bridgeport.

5 thoughts on “Unnoticed

  1. Mark's avatar

    Deep heart feelings and imagery.

  2. Jean DeVito's avatar

    I imagine that I am feeling my heart.

  3. Zoe's avatar

    This makes me feel sad 😦

  4. Maria's avatar

    Remember the little finger hole in the door? The shadows of the blinds? You had such a big job for such a little girl! You get an A++++++
    Love Maria

  5. Jean DeVito's avatar

    Thanks for the best grade ever!

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