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PipLove: A story of tortious interference with an inheritance

First in-class exercise

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Choose three random phrases from a stack of cards and rank them in a 1, 2, 3 order.  The first phrase goes in the first sentence, the second in the middle, and the third in the last sentence of a paragraph.  Timed write for 15 minutes.  PHRASES:  A foul odor, a repetitive noise, a stuffed grizzly bear.

The smiling waitress sets a steaming bowl on the table in front of my eager husband at the Longhorn Restaurant.  The elk meat in brown gravy releases a foul odor and the steam sets off my loud sneeze.  Our dark, leather-curved booth is in a corner, back-to-back to the kitchen wall, where I hear and feel the repercussions of a repetitive noise – a whack-whack-whack, which I imagine is a chef hitting a cleaver on meats that I don’t eat, such as bison, elk, and alligator.  It’s hard to eat in this place as every square inch of wall space is decorated with man’s trophies from hunts around the world – a brown-striped zebra, an honorable eagle, a wild boar, and one stuffed grizzly bear with smoky eyes who offers his out-stretched paws in a “why me?” way.

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Author: Jean DeVito

Published author.  Partner in a family-established Antique Restoration business. Publications:   “Reflections: Stories from Local Writers/God Is Good.” N.p.: Ferguson Library, 2017. 31-49. Print. “Three Childhood Homes.” The Stamford Advocate 24 Dec. 2016, A ed., News sec.: A011. Print. “The Little Things.” CT Association of Area Agencies on Aging. May 2014.  Older Americans Month 2014 Essay Contest.  State winner.  Connecticut, Bridgeport.

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